My BS paper that I wrote overnight

Subject: My BS paper that I wrote overnight Mon Mar 29, 2010 5:14 pm

It's about terrorists.

Enjoy.

My essay question:
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I know I win.

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Quote :: [19:17:17] Ar Pee Gee : I like Correct grammer, and complete sentences
[19:18:06] @ SpiritofSteel : correct*
[19:18:17] @ SpiritofSteel : sentences.*
[19:18:30] Ar Pee Gee : I never said Spelling =P
[19:18:58] @ SpiritofSteel : Capital letters and periods are grammar.

Subject: Re: My BS paper that I wrote overnight Mon Mar 29, 2010 5:30 pm

I lol'd. Also I found it amusing that they red penned you for saying "weren't" instead of "were not".

Subject: Re: My BS paper that I wrote overnight Mon Mar 29, 2010 5:51 pm

Terrible essay. Terrible.

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[20:43:16] Azness

: Sarcasm is a puberty thing

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Truest words ever said.

Hold fast to dreams
For when dreams go
Life is a barren field
Frozen with snow.
Hold fast to dreams
For if dreams die
Life is a broken-winged bird
That cannot fly.
Langston Hughes

Subject: Re: My BS paper that I wrote overnight Mon Mar 29, 2010 6:15 pm

Spartawolf wrote:: I lol'd. Also I found it amusing that they red penned you for saying "weren't" instead of "were not".

I was gonna say something like that, too...

Subject: Re: My BS paper that I wrote overnight Mon Mar 29, 2010 6:42 pm

86% :O

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Subject: Re: My BS paper that I wrote overnight Mon Mar 29, 2010 7:26 pm

I kinda like it tbh. It's not as bad as Luky says it is. I also find it funny that you can't use contraptions such as "weren't" and "they're". It may be more professional, but I doubt it makes a difference.

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Findows⁷ wrote:: 86% :O

his grammar and stuff was bad i guess, i thought it was fine, but there were 50 or so marks on the essay, so yeah.

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Hey a B isn't that bad.

Subject: Re: My BS paper that I wrote overnight Wed Mar 31, 2010 1:38 am

Findows⁷ wrote:: 86% :O

Fin, cmon now. You're a college student. You know that that essay was some bs lol. Don't lie.

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[20:43:16] Azness

: Sarcasm is a puberty thing

^
Truest words ever said.

Hold fast to dreams
For when dreams go
Life is a barren field
Frozen with snow.
Hold fast to dreams
For if dreams die
Life is a broken-winged bird
That cannot fly.
Langston Hughes

Subject: Re: My BS paper that I wrote overnight Wed Mar 31, 2010 2:34 am

Haha yea dude. tbh some profs don't really care since it's a pain in the ass to read anyways.

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Subject: Re: My BS paper that I wrote overnight Wed Mar 31, 2010 6:29 pm

Findows⁷ wrote:: Haha yea dude. tbh some profs don't really care since it's a pain in the ass to read anyways.

:O. So college = easy A?

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[20:43:16] Azness

: Sarcasm is a puberty thing

^
Truest words ever said.

Hold fast to dreams
For when dreams go
Life is a barren field
Frozen with snow.
Hold fast to dreams
For if dreams die
Life is a broken-winged bird
That cannot fly.
Langston Hughes

Subject: Re: My BS paper that I wrote overnight Wed Mar 31, 2010 7:27 pm

Failure to use plural words correctly...

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its a good essay...i mean he can HAS some mistakes (over 50) but at least it makes sense
thats my opinion

Subject: Re: My BS paper that I wrote overnight Wed Mar 31, 2010 8:49 pm

uhhhhhhhh yea badasss paper

Subject: Re: My BS paper that I wrote overnight Wed Mar 31, 2010 9:38 pm

ch4rg3rs4lyf wrote:

Findows⁷ wrote:: Haha yea dude. tbh some profs don't really care since it's a pain in the ass to read anyways.

:O. So college = easy A?

It depends on the prof.
Ratemyprofessor.com ftw

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Subject: Re: My BS paper that I wrote overnight Fri Apr 02, 2010 12:00 am

Findows⁷ wrote:

ch4rg3rs4lyf wrote:

Findows⁷ wrote:: Haha yea dude. tbh some profs don't really care since it's a pain in the ass to read anyways.

:O. So college = easy A?

It depends on the prof.
Ratemyprofessor.com ftw

:O. I never knew that shit existed! Jesus christ finfin, you just made my college life easy lol.

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[20:43:16] Azness

: Sarcasm is a puberty thing

^
Truest words ever said.

Hold fast to dreams
For when dreams go
Life is a barren field
Frozen with snow.
Hold fast to dreams
For if dreams die
Life is a broken-winged bird
That cannot fly.
Langston Hughes

Posts : 359 Join date : 2009-04-08 Age : 26 Location : U.K

That question is so racist :P