Looks pretty good, JGB. You already have 280 views in less than a day, EPIC. Tips to improve:
1) Talk a bit less about your personal life.
2) Find a way to record in game music too.
3) blah blah blah. Use legit shines and sidebars if you can blah blah blah.
You seem to be off to a good start man. Peace. I'm subscribing to you soon.
An LP watcher, DatPokemonNerd.