Rate my OU Shoddy Team please!

Gargoyle (Aerodactyl) (M) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 4 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd
Jolly nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Taunt
- Stealth Rock
- Ice Fang
- Stone Edge



Volador (Skarmory) (F) @ Leftovers
Ability: Keen Eye
EVs: 252 HP/64 Atk/176 Def/16 Spd
Impish nature (+Def, -SAtk)
- Spikes
- Whirlwind
- Roost
- Brave Bird



King Dedede (Empoleon) (M) @ Petaya Berry
Ability: Torrent
EVs: 12 HP/12 Def/232 Spd/252 SAtk
Modest nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Substitute
- Agility
- Surf
- Grass Knot



Neev (Cresselia) (F) @ Leftovers
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 252 HP/200 Def/56 SDef
Calm nature (+SDef, -Atk)
- Rest
- Sleep Talk
- Ice Beam
- Psychic



MegaMan X (Metagross) @ Choice Band
Ability: Clear Body
EVs: 252 HP/236 Atk/12 Def/8 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Thunderpunch
- Earthquake
- Meteor Mash
- Explosion



Dragomba (Breloom) (M) @ Toxic Orb
Ability: Poison Heal
EVs: 44 HP/252 Atk/212 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Substitute
- Focus Punch
- Seed Bomb
- Spore

Why Ice Fang on Aero. And i dunno if a sash it totally right for it.
And Brave Bird on Skarm?
Also I'd trade grass knot for ice beam on Emp.
Cres is fine for it's strat..
Breloom I would say Rock Slide for Seeb Bomb.
And the Gross should have agility instead of explosion IMO and no band.

Alright team, needs a couple adjustments for the sake of type coverage and overall prediction and countering.
6.5/10 I guess.

Grass Knot on Emp. is great because his weaknesses are bulky water types that can take a Petaya berry Surf and most of the time Gliscor,Salamence and Flygon go down with a surf.

Brave Bird is more reliable than Drill Peck and Skarm has Leftovers so he can deal with the recoil damage.

Ice fang on Aerodactyl is for Salamence, Latias, and Celebi.

Okay I suppose on the first part, it's not a bad idea.

Perhaps a Shell Bell then instead of leftovers on the Skarm? That's what I used in WiFi.

Well maybe on the Aerodactyl you could Thunder Fang or EQ. I just think Ice Fang isn't the most wonderful option. I mean it's only to set up on the opponent, but still

Campa wrote:

Gargoyle (Aerodactyl) (M) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 4 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd
Jolly nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Taunt
- Stealth Rock
- Ice Fang
- Stone Edge

Earthquake > Ice Fang
Rock Slide > Stone Edge.
Period.


Volador (Skarmory) (F) @ Leftovers
Ability: Keen Eye
EVs: 252 HP/64 Atk/176 Def/16 Spd
Impish nature (+Def, -SAtk)
- Spikes
- Whirlwind
- Roost
- Brave Bird

Standard Skarm works. Perhaps try out this EV spread, though?
252 HP | 80 Def | 176 SpDef
It's overall quite bulky and can even take on special attacks.

Use Shed Shell, though, since it can Roost off Brave Bird damage.



King Dedede (Empoleon) (M) @ Petaya Berry
Ability: Torrent
EVs: 12 HP/12 Def/232 Spd/252 SAtk
Modest nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Substitute
- Agility
- Surf
- Grass Knot




Neev (Cresselia) (F) @ Leftovers
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 252 HP/200 Def/56 SDef
Calm nature (+SDef, -Atk)
- Rest
- Sleep Talk
- Ice Beam
- Psychic



MegaMan X (Metagross) @ Choice Band
Ability: Clear Body
EVs: 252 HP/236 Atk/12 Def/8 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Thunderpunch
- Earthquake
- Meteor Mash
- Explosion



Dragomba (Breloom) (M) @ Toxic Orb
Ability: Poison Heal
EVs: 44 HP/252 Atk/212 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Substitute
- Focus Punch
- Seed Bomb
- Spore

Okay I'm done with going member by member. It looks like you took 6 OUs and slapped them together calling it a team. What's the goal or point of this team? That should be the first question you ask. After that you should build to achieve that goal, not to have X Y and Z jobs filled in.

Gargoyle (Aerodactyl) (M) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 4 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd
Jolly nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Earthquake
- Stealth Rock
- Ice Fang
- Stone Edge



Volador (Skarmory) (F) @ Leftovers
Ability: Keen Eye
EVs: 252 HP/64 Atk/176 Def/16 Spd
Impish nature (+Def, -SAtk)
- Spikes
- Whirlwind
- Roost
- Brave Bird

Make skarmory your lead.

King Dedede (Empoleon) (M) @ Petaya Berry
Ability: Torrent
EVs: 12 HP/12 Def/232 Spd/252 SAtk
Modest nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Substitute
- Agility
- Surf
- Ice Beam



Neev (Cresselia) (F) @ Lum Berry
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 252 HP/200 Def/56 SDef
Calm nature (+SDef, -Atk)
- Rest
- Sleep Talk
- Ice Beam
- Psychic



MegaMan X (Metagross) @ Choice Band
Ability: Clear Body
EVs: 252 HP/252 Atk/0 Def/0 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Thunderpunch
- Earthquake
- Meteor Mash
- Explosion



Dragomba (Breloom) (M) @ Toxic Orb
Ability: Poison Heal
EVs: 0 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Substitute
- Focus Punch
- Seed Bomb
- Spore

This team was made when I first got into competitive battleing like 2 months ago el oh el...

So yeah its really bad. xD

it isnt that bad

Campa wrote:

This team was made when I first got into competitive battleing like 2 months ago el oh el...

So yeah its really bad. xD

Not bad for a beginner.

I've seen far worse teams than this.

You need to put descriptions on your Pokemon. I'm locking this as of now, until you PM me your edit.