Rate my team please

my pokemons are:
snorlax:
moves are: crunch, earthquake,psychic,rest :
nature :relaxed :
ability : immunity:
items : none .

magmotar: fire punch, heat wave, protect,thunderbolt :
nature: lax
ability : flame body
item : none .

yanmega: aerial ace , bug buzz, toxic, psychic :
nature : hardy
ability : speed boost
item : leftovers

mightyena: crunch, dark pulse, fire fang, shadow ball :
nature : bold
ability : qiuck feet
item : none

abomasnow: earthquake, ice beam, ice punch, water pulse
nature : brave
ability : snow warning
item : none

electivire : discharge, earthquake, flamethrower, thunderbolt
nature : serious
ability : motor drive
item: none

all pokemon have 60 evs in all categories
all pokemons have
please rate. thx

First, go to here: https://sosbrigade.forummotion.com/rate-my-team-f39/obligatory-read-before-posting-topic-t180.htm

We need more info like: movesets, nature, ability, items, ect...

darkanglcrx wrote:

my pokemons are:
snorlax:
moves are: crunch, earthquake,psychic,rest :
nature :relaxed :
ability : immunity:
items : none .

magmotar: fire punch, heat wave, protect,thunderbolt :
nature: lax
ability : flame body
item : none .

yanmega: aerial ace , bug buzz, toxic, psychic :
nature : hardy
ability : speed boost
item : leftovers

mightyena: crunch, dark pulse, fire fang, shadow ball :
nature : bold
ability : qiuck feet
item : none

abomasnow: earthquake, ice beam, ice punch, water pulse
nature : brave
ability : snow warning
item : none

electivire : discharge, earthquake, flamethrower, thunderbolt
nature : serious
ability : motor drive
item: none

all pokemon have 60 evs in all categories
all pokemons have
please rate. thx

If this is your competative battling team, you need to rethink all of the movesets, ev's, items, and natures.

Example: A brave abamosnow doesn't need ice punch and water pulse, it also could be use as a staller. use this website to help you out:

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/

darkanglcrx wrote:

my pokemons are:
snorlax:
moves are: crunch, earthquake,psychic,rest :
nature :relaxed :
ability : immunity:
items : none .

magmotar: fire punch, heat wave, protect,thunderbolt :
nature: lax
ability : flame body
item : none .

yanmega: aerial ace , bug buzz, toxic, psychic :
nature : hardy
ability : speed boost
item : leftovers

mightyena: crunch, dark pulse, fire fang, shadow ball :
nature : bold
ability : qiuck feet
item : none

abomasnow: earthquake, ice beam, ice punch, water pulse
nature : brave
ability : snow warning
item : none

electivire : discharge, earthquake, flamethrower, thunderbolt
nature : serious
ability : motor drive
item: none

all pokemon have 60 evs in all categories
all pokemons have
please rate. thx

very good in game team but for a competitive team it is somewhat lacking.

Seems like its move coverage isn't all that great.

Everything in Bold Blue letters are my writing.

darkanglcrx wrote:

my pokemons are:


Snorlax@Leftovers
Nature -Careful
Ability - Thick Fat
Evs
168 HP / 120 Defense / 220 Special Defense
Moves
-Curse
-Earthquake
-Fire Punch
-Return

If this is your lead then use curse first turn and start hacking away.


Magmotar@Choise Specs
Nature - Modest
Ability - Flame Body
Evs
Special Attack 252 / Speed 252 / HP 4
Moves
-Overheat
-Thinderbolt
-Focus Blast
-HP Ice

This is your all out Special Attackers.

Mightyena@Choise Band
Nature - Adamant
Ability - Intimidate
Evs
252 Attack / 252 Speed / 4HP
Moves
-Sucker Punch
-Return
-Fire Fang
-Crunch

Not a good choice, but I did give it a moveset

Abomasnow@Choise Scarf
Nature - Hasty
Ability - Snow Warning
Evs
252 Special Attack / 252 Speed / 4 HP
Moves
-Blizzard
-Leech Seed
-Grass Knot
-HP Fire/Ground

??? I can't think of a good description.

Eectivire@Life Orb
Nature - Mild
Ability - Motor Drive
Evs
252 Special Attack / 220 Speed / 36 Attack
Moves
-Thunderbolt
-Flamethrower
-Cross Chop
-HP Ice


all pokemon have 60 evs in all categories
all pokemons have
please rate. thx

Next time put your team like this -

Pokemon@Item
Nature -
Ability -
Evs
Moves
-
-
-
-

Rpgfan1994 wrote:

Everything in Bold Blue letters are my writing.

darkanglcrx wrote:

my pokemons are:
Snorlax@Leftovers
Nature -Careful
Ability - Thick Fat
Evs
168 HP / 120 Defense / 220 Special Defense
Moves
-Curse
-Earthquake
-Fire Punch
-Return

If this is your lead then use curse first turn and start hacking away.


Magmotar@Choise Specs
Nature - Modest
Ability - Flame Body
Evs
Special Attack 252 / Speed 252 / HP 4
Moves
-Overheat
-Thinderbolt
-Focus Blast
-HP Ice

This is your all out Special Attackers.

Mightyena@Choise Band
Nature - Adamant
Ability - Intimidate
Evs
252 Attack / 252 Speed / 4HP
Moves
-Sucker Punch
-Return
-Fire Fang
-Crunch

Not a good choice, but I did give it a moveset

Abomasnow@Choise Scarf
Nature - Hasty
Ability - Snow Warning
Evs
252 Special Attack / 252 Speed / 4 HP
Moves
-Blizzard
-Leech Seed
-Grass Knot
-HP Fire/Ground

??? I can't think of a good description.

Eectivire@Life Orb
Nature - Mild
Ability - Motor Drive
Evs
252 Special Attack / 220 Speed / 36 Attack
Moves
-Thunderbolt
-Flamethrower
-Cross Chop
-HP Ice

all pokemon have 60 evs in all categories
all pokemons have
please rate. thx

Next time put your team like this -

Pokemon@Item
Nature -
Ability -
Evs
Moves
-
-
-
-

Nothing but the top is blue.
>_>

StebenL wrote:

Rpgfan1994 wrote:

Everything in Bold Blue letters are my writing.

darkanglcrx wrote:

my pokemons are:
Snorlax@Leftovers
Nature -Careful
Ability - Thick Fat
Evs
168 HP / 120 Defense / 220 Special Defense
Moves
-Curse
-Earthquake
-Fire Punch
-Return

If this is your lead then use curse first turn and start hacking away.


Magmotar@Choise Specs
Nature - Modest
Ability - Flame Body
Evs
Special Attack 252 / Speed 252 / HP 4
Moves
-Overheat
-Thinderbolt
-Focus Blast
-HP Ice

This is your all out Special Attackers.

Mightyena@Choise Band
Nature - Adamant
Ability - Intimidate
Evs
252 Attack / 252 Speed / 4HP
Moves
-Sucker Punch
-Return
-Fire Fang
-Crunch

Not a good choice, but I did give it a moveset

Abomasnow@Choise Scarf
Nature - Hasty
Ability - Snow Warning
Evs
252 Special Attack / 252 Speed / 4 HP
Moves
-Blizzard
-Leech Seed
-Grass Knot
-HP Fire/Ground

??? I can't think of a good description.

Eectivire@Life Orb
Nature - Mild
Ability - Motor Drive
Evs
252 Special Attack / 220 Speed / 36 Attack
Moves
-Thunderbolt
-Flamethrower
-Cross Chop
-HP Ice

all pokemon have 60 evs in all categories
all pokemons have
please rate. thx

Next time put your team like this -

Pokemon@Item
Nature -
Ability -
Evs
Moves
-
-
-
-

Nothing but the top is blue.
>_>

I fixed it

I noticed xD, got confused when I saw it.

StebenL wrote:

I noticed xD, got confused when I saw it.

Sorry. I just hope you don't get a headache from all the blue XD

Rpgfan1994 wrote:

StebenL wrote:

I noticed xD, got confused when I saw it.

Sorry. I just hope you don't get a headache from all the blue XD

Blue isn't one of those colors that annoy me, and Mightyena's aren't really ever used. I rather use an Absol to be honest >.>

StebenL wrote:

Rpgfan1994 wrote:

StebenL wrote:

I noticed xD, got confused when I saw it.

Sorry. I just hope you don't get a headache from all the blue XD

Blue isn't one of those colors that annoy me, and Mightyena's aren't really ever used. I rather use an Absol to be honest >.>

I know what you mean, but he wanted me to rate his team Mightyenas included.

Rpgfan1994 wrote:

StebenL wrote:

Rpgfan1994 wrote:

StebenL wrote:

I noticed xD, got confused when I saw it.

Sorry. I just hope you don't get a headache from all the blue XD

Blue isn't one of those colors that annoy me, and Mightyena's aren't really ever used. I rather use an Absol to be honest >.>

I know what you mean, but he wanted me to rate his team Mightyenas included.

I know, I hope he realizes they suck :@

StebenL wrote:

Rpgfan1994 wrote:

StebenL wrote:

Rpgfan1994 wrote:

StebenL wrote:

I noticed xD, got confused when I saw it.

Sorry. I just hope you don't get a headache from all the blue XD

Blue isn't one of those colors that annoy me, and Mightyena's aren't really ever used. I rather use an Absol to be honest >.>

I know what you mean, but he wanted me to rate his team Mightyenas included.

I know, I hope he realizes they suck :@

Me too.

Well I'm very sleepy, so I guess I will go to bed now. Night Steben.

Don't build the team for him. Use his team, and bring out it's potential only changing Pokemon when necessary.

If you want to see how to do a good RMT:

http://marriland.com/phpbb/viewtopic.php?f=63&t=341211

http://marriland.com/phpbb/viewtopic.php?f=63&t=342265

Take examples from those two when making one of these in the future.