RATE MY TEAM PLZ :)

THIS IS MY NEW TEAM PEEPS

I KILL GENGARS (ENTEI)
SHIZY


FluffyFTW(SHAYMIN)
DECENT POKE BUT NOT GOOD MOVES OR NOT GOOD SPECS


LUCARIO
MINT POKE BUT HELD BACK


DUSKNOIR
ROTOMS WELL BETTER


UXIE
NOT GOOD IN OU



LollyPoP(REGICE)
AMAZING SP DEF BUT WEAK IN MOST AREAS

THATS IT COMMENT IT AND RATE>_<

I'd reccomend replacing Lucario's Focus Sash with a Life Orb. The damage output is much better, and SR breaks the sash anyways.
I might give a full rate later.

K thanks

If you can''t be bothered to spell "please'' properly then I can''t be bother to rate your team.



Also I know virtually nothing about competative battling anyway. :P

WHAT?

um well ur team is a little on the uber ou side

just try to take out entei and it wont be so bad and replace it with either a houndoom or a charizard

ExDarkrai wrote:

If you can''t be bothered to spell "please'' properly then I can''t be bother to rate your team.



Also I know virtually nothing about competative battling anyway. :P

It's not like he's the first person here to type like that -_-'

bbigman76 wrote:

um well ur team is a little on the uber ou side

just try to take out entei and it wont be so bad and replace it with either a houndoom or a charizard

el oh el, uber Ou side. Entei is a UU pke if u didnt realize it before.

Also, i would suggest adding more Ou pokes like heatran instead of entei.

Entei is NU.

Inertia wrote:

Entei is NU.

And he sucks, along with Houndoom and Charizard. SR says hai.

I'll maybe get to a full rate, but if I do it'll be harsh, cruel, brutal, and critical. Because this team sucks.

How can u say my team sucks when u haven't even seen it in action.
Additionally entei is my LEAD so it can't get effected by sr unless a switch it out
Finally this team isn't UBER and i have been wi-fi battling for a long time

I HOPE THIS ANSWERS EVERYONE

You dont need to see a Team in action to know that it sucks.

Dude, this team is not well built, at all.

bigd1240 wrote:

THIS IS MY NEW TEAM PEEPS

I KILL GENGARS (ENTEI)
THE LEAD

Item: Choice Specs
Nature: Modest
EV Spread: 252 in Special Attack, 252 in Speed, 6 in Hit Points
Move 1: Eruption
Move 2: Heat Wave
Move 3: Shadow Ball
Move 4: Hidden Power (Ground)

Crappy lead, loses to every common lead out there and then some. These are the top 20 leads in OU (which this team is for since you have Shaymin, Lucario, and Dusknoir. 1 OU Pokes make a team OU):

Azelf - Sets up Stealth Rocks then Explodes since it carries Focus Sash and outspeeds you.

Metagross - Earthquakes as you die, then sets up or Explodes at it's leisure since it can take Eruption due to Occa Berry

Jirachi - Sets Up or U-Turns out to a counter

Swampert Earthquake, Rocks, Roar, this thing destroys you

Aerodactyl - Rock Slide/Stone Edge OHKOs then you're down a lead and their Focus Sash is still intact

Infernape - Fake Out then CC KOs and then it's Sash is still intact so it can set up Rocks whenever it wants and go down hurting something else

Hippowdon - Earthquake. You can't hurt it at all and any minuscule damge you do it can recover off.

Ninjask - Protect, Substitute, Protect, Substitute. If you miss on the Sub, it Swords Dances. Then it goes ahead and Baton Passes the boosts t omething like Tyranitar. You're now boned in the ass.

Bronzong - Earthquake or Explosion KOs you and it runs Occa BErry pretty often.

Roserade - Outspeeds you for Sleep Powder, then uses HP [Ground] to kill you after setting up Toxic Spikes.

Tyranitar - You're not hurting it. Period. You are totally absolutely boned if for no other reason, Sandstorm.

Smeargle - Spores you, then sets up.

Heatran - Shuca takes the HP [Ground], you take Earth Power. You die.

Gliscor - Earthquake and Rocks.

Abomasnow - Hail starts, he swaps to Tentacruel to take Eruption, Eruption loses out all power as Tenta sets up at least 1 layer of Toxic Spikes, assuming you switch. No good Hail Stall lacks Tentacruel.

Crobat - Hypnosis, Brave Bird, U-Turn to a counter, it has a lot of options.

Mamoswine - Earthquake for a KO. You outspeed, but they carry Focus Sash which lets them use Endeavor on your next Poke or go ahead and set up Rocks.

Forretress - You win? OMG. Not really, it just leaves to a counter and you delay EHs for a while.

Ambipom - Fake Out + Return and you're dead.

Weavile - Fake Out, and it gets 2 more attacks thanks to Focus Sash.

CHANGE YOUR LEAD.




FluffyFTW(SHAYMIN)
THE SPECIAL SWEEPER

Item: Choice Specs
Nature: Timid
EV Spread: 252 in Special Attack, 252 in Speed, 6 in Hit Points
Move 1: Seed Flare
Move 2: Psychic
Move 3: Earth Power
Move 4: Grass Knot

Psychic is a crappy move, Seed Flare and Grass Knot are un-needed together. Shymin is a crappy Specs Pokemon.


LUCARIO
THE EARLY/LATE GAME SWEEPER

Item: Focus Sash
Nature: Jolly
EV Spread: 252 in Attack, 252 in Speed, 6 in Defence
Move 1: Swords Dance
Move 2: Close Combat
Move 3: Earthquake
Move 4: Extreme Speed

Adamant Nature and give him Crunch and you have an actually decent set. Unfortunately it's held back by the rest of this crappy team.


DUSKNOIR
THE PHYSICAL WALL WHICH CAN ALSO TAKE SPECIAL HITS WELL

Item: Leftovers
Nature: Bold
EV Spread: 252 in HP(Hit Points), 252 in Defence, 6 in Special Defence
Move 1: Pain Split
Move 2: Ice Punch
Move 3: Earthquake
Move 4: Will-O-Wisp

Dusknoir is outclassed totally by Rotom-A now. Use Rotom-A, Dusky is waaaay too easy to break.


PIXIE PWNS(UXIE)
THE MIXED WALL

Item: Leftovers
Nature: Calm
EV Spread: 252 in HP(Hit Points), 150 in Defence, 108 in Special Defence
Move 1: Stealth Rocks
Move 2: Yawn
Move 3: Psychic
Move 4: U-Turn


Underwhelming in OU, especially with with rest of your team no making up for hs weaknesses


LollyPoP(REGICE)
MAINLY A SPECIAL WALL BUT CAN TAKE PHYSICAL HITS

Item: Leftovers
Nature: Calm
EV Spread: 252 in HP(Hit Points), 158 in Defence, 100 in Special Defence
Move 1: Ice Beam
Move 2: Thunder Wave
Move 3: Seismic Toss
Move 4: Explosion

SR weak, CC weak, just...weak.

THATS IT COMMENT IT AND RATE>_<

SubGengar sweeps your entire team, Physical Infernape sweeps your entire team, a LOT sweeps your entire team. Why? It's a SHITTY TEAM.

In the first place you have no synergy. This means your Pokes aren't working as a team, you don't have something to redirect Fire attacks coming at Shaymin to, because you haven't thought about it. Entei will die to just about any lead that comes out and if not it's SR weak without any real benefit.

Secondly, you're team building wrong. You don't just slap up jobs like "Physical Sweeper, Mixed Sweeper, Special Wall, etc" up and hope your team works. It WON'T. You have to have a goal, on offensive team this is usually a goal of sweeping with a particular Pokemon, like Lucario. You make a list of Lucario's biggest counters and checks and use your team to beat them, allowing Lucario to come in late game, set up and sweep.

Thirdly, you don't seem to understand what the point of Choice Items are. At this point you use Grass Knot with Shaymin and a Mence will come in, Dragon Dance, and sweep your entire team because you were stuck in Grass Knot.

Trash this horrible, horrible team and learn to play OU with OU before you try and play it with weaker/inferior Pokemon. Because you don't know how to do it, and you're obviously not a good enough player to pull it off.

I'll even start your new team for you. Name a set up sweeper, any set up sweeper. (Lucario, Empoleon, Infernape, Salamence, Metagross, Azelf, etc.) and I'll start you on the right track to building a decent team, because it seems to me you need the help.

Thanks For Your Comments just saying that i drew with bw5454 on youtube and ive only lost with this team once and that's to PulseEffects 1-0 ive won 8 time and they r not frickin inferior because uxie is one of the best wall in the game ill take u on with this team and then we'll see who wins yes i know this team isn't the greatest. i understand that but that gives you no right to say my team suck. Also my favourite Pokemon is salamence so i now all about the OU tier thankyou very much. Acee also ill battle u on youtube and then we will see

Finally this isn't my team anymore so shut the F*** up about it.

Pokemon is ment to be fun not so serious like its a matter of life and death

bigd1240 wrote:

Thanks For Your Comments just saying that i drew with bw5454 on youtube

Because YouTube players are good now. Seriously 90% of YouTube players are horrible, few exceptions in WastedSkyPirate, MukuBird, and select few others.

and ive only lost with this team once and that's to PulseEffects 1-0 ive won 8 time

The record means nothing if you're not playing against good players.

and they r not frickin inferior because uxie is one of the best wall in the game

Blissey, Hippowdon, Skarmory, Bronzong, Tentacruel, Cresselia, Swampert, Celebi, Rotom, Zapdos, those are some of the best walls in the game. Uxie is good, but he's generally worse than these guys because of his typing having almost no good resistances, his HP stat being pretty low, and lack of great support moves. Seriously, no recover? WTF? Also he sucks nuggets on this team.

ill take u on with this team and then we'll see who wins yes i know this team isn't the greatest.

It's not worth my time to put this team in it's place. And it obviously isn't the greatest. Or even close. You're on the waaay low section in terms of both the team and the RMT format.

i understand that but that gives you no right to say my team suck.

YOUR TEAM SUCKS. Get over yourself and try to take constructive criticism. A RATE MY TEAM thread means I can post my opinions of your team here. You posted it for that reason, I hope. RMTs are not to garner praise or be congratulated for, it's to get advice and criticism about your team so you can improve. Suck it the fuck up.

Also my favourite Pokemon is salamence so i now all about the OU tier thankyou very much.

If you know so much about OU why are you using such a crappy team in OU play? My favorite Pokemon is Absol, that doesn't mean I'm the best UU battler EVAR. All it means is that my favorite Pokemon is Absol. If you know so much about OU what are the top 5 threats in OU as of July?

Acee also ill battle u on youtube and then we will see

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Finally this isn't my team anymore so shut the F*** up about it.

You posted a RMT topic, I criticized your team. That's how it WORKS. If you don't want or can't take criticism don't post your team. Simple as that.

Pokemon is ment to be fun not so serious like its a matter of life and death

Pokemon is meant to be fun, and I most certainly am no treating it like life and death. It's COMPETITIVE Pokemon. Pokemon played for the sake of WINNING. You're trying to win with inferior and weaker pieces, I told you not to. Simple as that. It's like you're trying to play chess without a Queen, Rook, or Bishop because they're "too good, lolz". Get over yourself.

Ciaran can be a big meany-head sometimes :)

Good Game Dude.
6-0, A Sweep With an Agiligross.
And that was with his other team, btw, guys.

Acee wrote:

Good Game Dude.
6-0, A Sweep With an Agiligross.
And that was with his other team, btw, guys.

You were the 6, right?

Ciaran wrote:

Acee wrote:

Good Game Dude.
6-0, A Sweep With an Agiligross.
And that was with his other team, btw, guys.

You were the 6, right?

Of Course.

This team is actually, possibly, the worst team I have EVER seen.
Choice Specs Entei as a lead?
Herp derp derp.

Okay everyone im now know i was 100% wrong about my team it sucks but i was pissed/dumb enough 2 think that my team was good im in progress of building a team which i hope u find well lets say more competitive here it is...





Swampert

Nature:Impish
Item:Leftovers
Ev's: 200 HP,252 SP DEF,58 ATK.

Moves:

Stealth Rocks
Roar
Earthquake
Waterfall



Heatran

Nature:Timid
Item:Choice Specs <---- I couldn't help it
Ev's: 58 HP, 200 SP ATK, 252 SPEED

Moves:

Fire Blast
Dragon Pulse
Earth Power
Dark Pulse




Skarmory

Nature:Bold
Item:Leftovers
Ev's: 252 HP,6 ATK,252 DEF

Moves:

Spikes
Roost
Brave Bird
Taunt



Salamence

Nature:Adamant
Item:Choice Scarf/Yache Berry
Ev's: 252 ATK,6 SP DEF,252 SPEED

Moves:

Outrage(Dragon Claw If Yache Berry)
Crunch
Stone Edge(Dragon Dance If Yache Berry)
Earthquake



Celebi

Nature:Calm
Item:Leftovers
Ev's: 252 HP,252 DEF,6 SP DEF

Moves:

Calm Mind
Recover
Psychic/Grass Knot
Thunder Wave/Leech Seed



Lucario

Nature:Adamant
Item: Life Orb
Ev's: 6 HP,252 ATK,252 SPEED

Moves:

Close Combat
Earthquake
Swords Dance
Blaze Kick

There U have it hopefully u think it's a better team and next time try and go a little easier

Hehe, so did you copy and paste this team?

The reason why I ask is simple,

1st - All the words within the movesets are spelled correctly, and judgeing by your other posts, you can't speel worht a shit.

and

2nd - You can't build a team, I mean have you seen your first RMT post!? It was horrible.

I am just saying this, but I think everyone should have originality, but that could just be my opinon

Rpgfan1994 wrote:

Hehe, so did you copy and paste this team?

The reason why I ask is simple,

1st - All the words within the movesets are spelled correctly, and judgeing by your other posts, you can't speel worht a shit.

and

2nd - You can't build a team, I mean have you seen your first RMT post!? It was horrible.

I am just saying this, but I think everyone should have originality, but that could just be my opinon

Haha, so true.

The new one's still miserable, although it is far better.

Can you post descriptions please? I cant really tell how your team goes together. Also, why didnt you just edit your first post?